Thursday, February 23, 2017

Intellect Drawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

My Brain is starving
nourishment low,
No conversation or
exciting tones
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Daniel Peter Jones
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Chinedu Dike 04 April 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth. A beautiful creation, Daniel. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Pamela Sinicrope 03 June 2017

Hunger! I like these lines: Bathe me in creation and wash me with rhyme brush me with intellect let our souls combine Your poem shouts out for inspiration and intellect through poetry, the arts, or anything...just be interesting, stimulating. You want discussions to squeeze...interesting word choice there. ;) Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 24 March 2017

Some wonderful lines, Daniel. Especially like your last stanza. Since you liked Closing Time, you might also like Resurrection. I wrote it a year before Cohen's death.

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Daniel Jones 24 March 2017

Much appreciated Richard, im heading right over to your poem resurrection now. Thanks for reading.

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