My Brain is starving
nourishment low,
No conversation or
exciting tones
...
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Hunger! I like these lines: Bathe me in creation and wash me with rhyme brush me with intellect let our souls combine Your poem shouts out for inspiration and intellect through poetry, the arts, or anything...just be interesting, stimulating. You want discussions to squeeze...interesting word choice there. ;) Thanks for sharing.
Some wonderful lines, Daniel. Especially like your last stanza. Since you liked Closing Time, you might also like Resurrection. I wrote it a year before Cohen's death.
Much appreciated Richard, im heading right over to your poem resurrection now. Thanks for reading.
Well conceived and elegantly brought forth. A beautiful creation, Daniel. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.