Saturday, June 27, 2009

Instrumentality: Part One Comments

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Alex Gomez 27 June 2009

An extraordinarily intriguing concept. Somewhat of a 'soul searching' or answer begging question that makes you think about reality. Excellent vocabulary usage as well. The only thing that I have a problem with is the structure....perhaps change the text block style to a more modernistic poetic one.

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Nicholas Neato

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