Instinctive Pinches Comments

Rare in the days are the lovely sights, I see her in the moonlit nights, ... Having no alternate the poor old child, Like ice cream cone turns soft and mild... Lovely, a fresh breeze of air, indeed. Enjoyed reading it.

Eye lids of the child when kiss each other, .........................beautiful poem enjoyed

Having no alternate the poor old child, Like ice cream cone turns soft and mild. I get the picture of an old couple quite romantic and so happy with the grand children...! Even when they live for the children, they never forget to live for themselves ! Enjoyed this sweet write!

Two behaviors, two children, an infant and an old child, two ways of pacifying, it's an amazing poem.

nice one- I see her in the moonlit nights, thanks :)