Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Instead I Wrote About You Comments

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I want to write something about it
For me

*The Seed*
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Mike Smith
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Souren Mondal 29 February 2016

One of finest piece of work I have ever read. That's all I can say Mike.. This poem of yours is sheer brilliance.. Just.Sheer.Brilliance.

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Mike Smith 29 February 2016

Thank you Souren. I think it a well accepted theory that our best works come from the heart. This is (quite literally) the case here. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It kind of came to me all at once, and in a short matter of minutes I had completed it. When I read it back I thought it worthy of sharing. Good to know I wasn't the only one. Your comment is much appreciated

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Kelly Kurt 24 February 2016

This is the writing of a person who should have been on this planet for scores of years, yet it was written by a man scratching his third decade. The amazing wording and phrasing aside, the insight, recognition and self realization displayed here are enough to grant you master status; not just of poetry, but of thinking. A rock and a hard place never looked quite so comfortable Because I was torn between two ultra massive black holes Jeebus, Mike! What a great few lines! Keep writing, just for you....but share it with us please.

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Mike Smith 24 February 2016

Thank you. Dear friend Kelly, you have been more of an inspiration to me than I can ever express. I think I will leave it at that, as my appreciation is inexpressible by words alone

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