Friday, September 22, 2017

Instant Riches Comments

Rating: 5.0

bits of betting cards
strewn on the floor
like confetti
bits of fractured dreams
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Jabulani Mzinyathi
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Chinedu Dike 27 September 2020

An insightful creation written with clarity of thought and mind. Truely captures the mind set of the gambler. Focused and factual.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2017

Dreams of instant riches are furrowed faces frustration laden. Amazing poem is drafted and shared here.10

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Jabulani Mzinyathi 23 September 2017

thanks for the compliment. deeply indebted

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