Drop a dream into the water,
In a moment it is gone.
But there are many ripples,
Circling on and on....
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Thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful poem, Shaun. So inspiring! God bless you.
This is a great poem! I don't know how much you love Goldsmith.. that's up to you! I find in you a great poet with amazing ink. All the best.
A nice traditional composing. And a nice poem in dedication to the Near, Dear and to Those who care. Self belief is the best tool handy to move forward in life. Heaven would certainly help those who help themselves
A great poem. A wonderful contribution to Poetry by a dedicated and one of a kind Poet.
Quite simply a wonderfully uplifting and inspirational piece of writing Shaun and typifies the talented writer that you are..A truly enjoyable and re readable piece..thank you so much for sharing this with us all. Your Friend Lodigiana x
A wonderful poem that uplifts the soul. No matter how many times it is read, the magic in this poem will never cease. So mellifluous when read. Indeed, a poetic gem. A great mark of a one of a kind Poet.
Thank you Susan for your most endearing and generously kind comment. I'm more than happy a poetess of your gifted qualities enjoyed reading it. I thank you again and take care and enjoy life and all the good it has to offer.
This read so s-m-o-o-t-h-l-y which is an attribute that is difficult to achieve- I know it often escapes me! Line after line inspires the reader in a sumptuous way! ! ! Top top marks! ! ! !
Lodigiana thank you so much for finding this and to leave such a glowing comment from such a unique and such a stand alone poetess as your good self humbles me. And the words, like our lives we live and lead will always be there. Its simply a matter of choosing the good ones and to live a good life. To choose to care and share. Thanks again and remain poetry blessed and forever enriched. Shaun.x.
Rose Marie, good Rose Marie what more can I possibly say. Except thank you. Thank you for revisiting. Thank you for rereading. Thank you for leaving another wondrous comment. And thank you for being my friend. For you and your gifted heartfelt poetry, Inspire me.
Michael many thanks for your most gracious comment good sir. I appreciate you for taking the time to read and appraise it. Thanks again and take care sir
The world is at present wrapped with storms and worries. Let us renew our strength and spirit with the wisdom embedded in this very inspiring and wonderful poem. Thank you, Shaun, for this timeless poem.
Shaun my dear friend..this is what poetry is all about..wonderfully expressive thoughts and perceptions..I love how you can be so creative, so very often! You are a true powerhouse of words! ..Lodigiana xx
Thank you Rose Marie for your most inspiring and gracious comment. And it's not just me you aid and uplift, for your comments for others are also inspiring and generous too. Heartfelt comments such as yours are warmly welcomed, timeless and more valuable than gold. Thank you again and I wish you every good virtue that life and poetry can offer your good self. Take care.
One of the best inspiring poems that I have ever read. A classic that must be read for generations to come. The closure lines are so uplifting. So beautifully crafted and conveyed by a great and brilliant Poet whose dedication to Poetry is beyond measure.
Deep and nicely crafted is this motivational rendition of yours.