“ In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth. Now the earth was formless and empty, darkness was over the surface of the deep, and the Spirit of God was hovering over the waters. And God said, let there be light, and there was light.’ (Genesis 1: l-3)
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Obed: This is a very good poem. It's always an inspiration when we have God in the Equasion. See ya Lynn
God's Inspiration becomes His Creation. An imaginative piece inspired by the Book of Genesis.
A very inspiring write, you have put the bible to good use in this poem, 10 Lynda xx
this is great! you put the bible to its full use in your poetry. i had just put my poem called ' inspiation' on line also. YOURS DESERVES A DOUBLE TEN
beautifully penned, as if you were present at the creation. My favorite lines: 'Inhabit this empty heart The breath of your spirit: The deep made Eden. '
When there was nothing, there was God. He is the creater of being-ness. Very inspirational write, Obed.
God is always the inspiration to light on this world! ! ! profound composition...Thanks! ! !
Be! Said He and it became. Nothing is impossible for the creator. The words are nothing other than the bearers of energy. Fill them with love and they'll become powerful. An inspiring write! Keep it up!
A thought provoking poem. May be read at several levels, intellectual, devotional and religious. Skillfully penned. Beauty scatters all around it. cp
very wonderful share... The beginning of the world...(Genesis 1: 1-31) you have the spirit of God within you.. to guide your mind, your heart and your finger to scribble the truth on God's wisdom the story of creation... thanks for sharing 10++++ lovelots, maia
A fantastic write. Be blessed. In Jesus' name, Amen!
He who created the creation, life and nature breathing the same pleasure and pain, created by Him.Nice read!
You have aptly captured the spirit of the Bible. Good work. 'Words lie there formless, dead'. 'Dead' is not true. What is not yet within our power of cognitive level need not be dead. It is only a stage of non-clarity from our level of perception. In oriental philosophy, this stage of non-clarity is coined as 'Avyaktha'. 'Vyaktha' is clarity. We have to understand that before the evolution of languages, there was man and his thoughts that implies the fact that for our thinking, language is not necessary. The primitive man heard the voices of this Nature in various moods and forms and began associating these forms of sounds to forms of Nature. These forms of sound later evolved into words and man associated these words to corresponding forms and ideas. For example, the word 'stream' has been evolved from the very voice of a stream. The primitive man clearly heard this voice. Another example - 'Crow'. Haven't you noticed the very cry of a crow - 'cra', 'cra'...