Friday, July 7, 2017

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segun Johnson Ozique
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Chinedu Dike 26 November 2019

A concise and poignant verse, a witty rendition of words. Thanks for sharing your beautiful haiku.

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Ravi A 07 July 2017

Can darkness bring in light? I don't know. What happens after the collision? Collision means disaster.

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Ravi. Thanks for your comment. Now, can darkness bring light? Yes, poetically, particularly when you stretch antithesis into litotes. Just play of words from my soul. And, to the use of the word-collision. Yes, to your reading, disaster but then others would see, 'crunch, ' 'jolt, ' 'strike' a forceful coming together that forces an angle; a different 'seeing' of enlightenment or revelation. What others may see as ordinary, I see different by the forceful collision of realisation of being a writer... Perhaps

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segun Johnson Ozique

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