Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Inspiration Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tender beats the heart that whispers
Through the darkness of the night
Ling`ring in the silent shadows
Utt`ring words to yet take flight
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Valerie Dohren
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A sweet and satisfying song that inspires conversation!

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

a lovely poem.. words flow like spring water

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Walterrean Salley 16 September 2012

A beautiful inspirational poem. Love the flow.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 September 2012

Soft, elegant and magnanimous poem! ! !

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Maria C. Pires Costa 16 September 2012

A delight to read this wonderfully crafted poem! You've portrayed so elegantly how Inspiration comes to you setting your soul aflame. May you keep being with that sweet companion for long! ! So much enjoyable!

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Danny Draper 15 September 2012

Inspiration comes softly treading into a creative mind words threading the perfect match, an artful wedding. Lovely write.

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Hans Vr 15 September 2012

This is a great poem, Valerie. The voice we hear so softly, the magic in it all, so well written, so well expressed in these excellent verses.

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Tim Woodhouse 14 September 2012

Simple and honest and movingly written. Thanks for your kind comments on my work.

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Stevie Taite 13 September 2012

Oh how lovely. I do not trust mine to come back to visit in the same pretty outfit! I am envious of your trust as I get tired! X a beautiful piece of penning!

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Kelvin Owusu 13 September 2012

every piece you write is always great this is no different well done

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Heather Wilson 12 September 2012

Another wonderful poem Val, where would we be without inspiration? .

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Neela Nath Das 12 September 2012

10-7-10-7...... loved the rhythm.My heart beat is throbbing like this. A WOW poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 September 2012

Inspiration can be acquired in many ways, one of those, is, reading some inspirational poem! nice poem!

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Valsa George 12 September 2012

We are eagerly waiting for your thoughts that 'float like spectres' to take shape and to be' fixed on the page'!

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Dave Walker 12 September 2012

As always a truly beautiful poem.

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Danny Draper 12 September 2012

Another fine and gentle piece for muse or lover celebrating inspiration.

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