Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Inspiration Comments

Rating: 4.5

What inspires one to act upon a thought
To bring forth creativity a moment once brought
Is it a scent, flavor, color or an emotion
Can the touch of a loved one tap into devotion
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 October 2015

Simple, sweet and sensational. Very well written. +10.

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Phyllis Strong 16 October 2015

Everyone has value to add. Thanks for sharing your heart.

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Ramesh T A 16 October 2015

Anything can be an inspiration to someone someday! That inspiration drives one's life to prosperity sure!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 October 2015

Fantastic memories and wonderful diction. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 October 2015

The memories of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kelly Seale 09 August 2012

Nice! I tend to rhyme more often than not, but it seems my words can touch others without the rhyme. (and it's much harder too!) Good write! -Kelly.

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Saadat Tahir 02 August 2012

neat lil poem...as usual great writing....the shear simplicity and fluidity speaks for itself.... you have a fan ma'am... blessings

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Eyan Desir 06 January 2010

Well i need some inspiration these days thanks

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Fay Slimm 09 December 2009

Inspiraton come in many forms and this is a good verse to enlighten the reader as to a few of those places Debbie - - we need reminders of where to look and when - - good piece of work - - 10 Fay

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Ian Bowen 09 December 2009

Deborah, nice, tidy piece of work that might inspire others.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 December 2009

very good poem! i now recall my psychology notes.... very nice notes... so is this poem

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Nikunj Sharma 09 December 2009

Why do a poem have to end cant the words go on why the road has a bend cant the poem grow on and on This one seems as wise as you I am really sure carries the content so truly true that the readers want more not everything I inherited comes from history there's a lot that cometh from your lovely poetry

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Ronn Michael Salinas 08 December 2009

'my rhyming is rare'... can't really disagree on that. two thumbs up

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