Thursday, July 16, 2009

Inspiration Comments

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the inspiration that i feel today
will never ever go away.
i saw a nine year old boy who taught
himself to play the guitar.
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another inspirational write...beautifully done

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 July 2009

hey yes sir.. nice one indeed.. but i d say your poem Stalker is the best i v read so far.. i ll see you soon.. you write good... with lots of love shan

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Heather S 21 July 2009

this is a beautiful poem, you are the inspiration in my life.thank you Mr.Louis

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Obed Souza 18 July 2009

Wonderful! 10! Nice doing.

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Christine Kerr 18 July 2009

I think you might have been watching 'America's Got Talent, ' If not, the inspiration you found to write this, reminded me of one girl I just seen who was born with a hair lip and a crew-ship wouldn't give her a chance. Her voice made the hair stand up on my arms. There just seems to be more and more talent coming from people that wouldn't normally be given a second glance. The Lord does indeed work in misterious ways, Your writing plus the actions you describe are living proof of that.

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~ Jon London ~ 18 July 2009

Another fine write Louis my friend....well composed and the message priceless....well penned 10++

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Kranthi Pothineni 18 July 2009

Wish your words are true...This lines had touched me deep 'when life seems to have turned its back and you feel under attack. when you think there's no place to go and the answers come very slow.'

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