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Insomniac Nights Comments

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Sleep is an imitation of death
But that death I didn't cherish since months.
A fairy snatched even the short naps.
A figure she is always flashing across the eyes
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Muhammad Imtiyaz
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Muhammad Imtiyaz 07 February 2018

Thaks everybody for your valuable comments

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 February 2018

A fairy snatched even the short naps. A figure she is always flashing across the eyes..beauty, attraction, infatuation, passion, emotion, sleepless nights. no one can but u alone............thank you for this passionate poem....... tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2016

She is but life in itself. Thanks for sharing.

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Denis Mair 25 February 2016

Your sleepless night is a rendezvous with life, which is her. This is a good way of describing a session of thoughts about the beloved. The line of scripture you quote makes me think that a sleepless night can be a confrontation with one's own immortal soul.

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 25 February 2016

Thank you very much sir for your valuable comment....

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 25 February 2016

Thank you very much sir for your valuable comment...

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M Asim Nehal 28 January 2016

Nicely thought and written...10+++

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 28 January 2016

thanks a lot

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