Insomnia (The Night After...) Comments
Colors of darkness crumble
heavy eyelids
in constant struggle...
grain of light peeks through the horizon
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'consumed by the night' - a memorable phrase relating it to the insomnia
dark poetry... lovin it! ! ! nice imageries too! ! did this actually happened to you?
Wonderfully written poem. Your choice of words is exquisite…with frozen colors / thawed beneath the sun / drifting in liquefied hues…I simply love these lines in particular.
great lines here and the maze it creates, , , real poetic metaphor
the dust the mist the white lightning awaken misery travels never come back
very nice! ! ! =) it gives me somehow a sense of sadness... that something is or has been bothering you... but well written...its like the emotions are tangible... I voted for it sis. I have a new poem...Freedon [from a cynic's eye], if you have time please check it out...and vote for it [if you want to...hehehe]
Galing nito kapatid. keep writing and I know you can write more wonderful flowers of your thoughts and the deepness of your soul. I love you, melvin
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7/22/2025 1:50:24 PM # 1.0.0
'I am consumed again by the night' a beautiful line on insomonia. Marvellous!