Sunday, March 11, 2018

Insomnia(Can't Sleep) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Soaked in a warm tub,
Played lullabies,
I've tried everything
To bring sleep to these eyes
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Rebecca Navarre 12 April 2018

Very Touchingly Sewn! ! ! ! ! Well Expressed! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Practicing Poetess 15 April 2018

Thank you, Becca! (It's more fun to write about it, than it is to experience it!) ;)

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Nudershada Cabanes 11 March 2018

It's hard to sleep when your mind is awake. Well penned verse.10 Nudershada

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Practicing Poetess 11 March 2018

Thanks so much, Nudershada! :)

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Bree Z Love 11 March 2018

Writers despair. This poem with it's dark humor. I love it! I feel this soooo.....

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Practicing Poetess 11 March 2018

I wonder how many of us are up writing (possibly dark, possibly bizarre) poetry, on nights when we cannot sleep! (Perhaps the Muse keeps us awake, because she wants us to write!)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 March 2018

Such a well expressed poem......👍👍👍

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Practicing Poetess 11 March 2018

Thank you for your generous comment, Bernard!

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