Saturday, March 13, 2010

Insomnia Comments

Rating: 4.3

You’ve made it;
You’ve just made your self invincible.
The fact that you own this heart of mine
Rendered me vulnerable;
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My Lady Eagle
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Brian Jani 22 May 2014

My lady eagle this is fantastic poetry

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The 4am Poet Worm 10 April 2010

awsome 3rd verse... Time and distance hinders me also

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Wandering Scarlet 06 April 2010

I HATE INSOMNIA! ! ! ! ! ! im suffering from it right now, i was just lying in bed for 2 hours and i am DYINGG

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Anonymous Butterfly 06 April 2010

I liked the lines: And here I am, A soul stuck in a sleepless state, Wrtiting poems just to forget. And: Then slowly, Just maybe, I'll forget the glow... ...That you possess. This poem reminded me of my own insomnia. I don't sleep enough. And I like the ending. Keep penning. B.B.

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