Thursday, October 22, 2009

Insomnia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Evil queen insomnia
let me sleep in a deep slumber
let me dream;
of familiar - unfamiliar faces,
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Milica Franchi De Luri
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 July 2010

Ma’am I think best remedy for Romantic Queen Insomnia make affair with Romantic King Somnolence and just tell him make romance and make me sleep…undoubtedly a unique poem…but like me please don’t gulp poetic pills…make you more insomniac….lolol … Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Marieta Maglas 11 January 2010

nice cognitive metaphor Evil queen insomnia well written meditative poem 10/10

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Melancholy Man 03 November 2009

such a unique and beautifully written piece, I could never fall asleep reading your poems. A wonderful perspective on insomnia

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Mamta Agarwal 28 October 2009

absolutely amazing, the manner in which you bring out the torture insomniacs go through, with great imagery and a touch of humour.10 goes to my fav Mamta

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 23 October 2009

marks 10 superb. the second stranza excellent. shan

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Indira Renganathan 22 October 2009

How wonderfully you've crafted...especially in the second stanza abot the pains you get out of insomnia....excellent flow of words too....thank you and thanks for your comment on mine too

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