Evil queen insomnia
let me sleep in a deep slumber
let me dream;
of familiar - unfamiliar faces,
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nice cognitive metaphor Evil queen insomnia well written meditative poem 10/10
such a unique and beautifully written piece, I could never fall asleep reading your poems. A wonderful perspective on insomnia
absolutely amazing, the manner in which you bring out the torture insomniacs go through, with great imagery and a touch of humour.10 goes to my fav Mamta
marks 10 superb. the second stranza excellent. shan
How wonderfully you've crafted...especially in the second stanza abot the pains you get out of insomnia....excellent flow of words too....thank you and thanks for your comment on mine too
Ma’am I think best remedy for Romantic Queen Insomnia make affair with Romantic King Somnolence and just tell him make romance and make me sleep…undoubtedly a unique poem…but like me please don’t gulp poetic pills…make you more insomniac….lolol … Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10