Insomnia Comments

i have also learned that depression doesnt sleep and it only stops when you are lying in a coffin

Felt like being on a merry-go-round of emotional turmoils.

WOW..i am amazed on how great u can write..another 10++

as i said, you are trully talented! your poems have such a rythm! it feels like if i am listening to music when i read them! great!

Sounds like your familar with insomnia...it's a good poem.kinda catchy. try a free verse..if your rhyme schemes are this cool, I wanna see what your free verse would be like.lol keep it up. :)

in the dead of the night is when the thoughts of the day burst like fireworks. nicely done.

wonderful poem, If somebody practices 'Compassion' will never suffer Insomnia. Hope it would work for you. Nicely penned.10+++

this is amazing, my friend.

Some of us are night people and some of us are day people.If you are up all night then a night job would work for you to keep you occupied.Night terrors are something to deal with...I get dreams of rats and giant pythons and when they wake me up I get on the computor and play games.Good thought evoking poem.You write very solid poetry and show great potential.Please continue writing....10! ! ! ! ! Thank you for your wonderful poems...

I too have trouble with sleep, but not such as yourself. Great write! Ten, Linda

very interesting, great flow and wonderful rhymes