Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Insomnia Comments

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Down to my last cigerett
This sleepless night full of regret
I'd pray a prayer but I don't have any left
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Travis Peterson
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Livi Topley 05 August 2008

This is a powerful poem. Your last line sums up how this person is, driven by insomnia till almost pushed over the edge. Putting a limit on the number of prayers is also very effective. Its subtle but perfect.

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Travis Peterson

Travis Peterson

Burbank, CA
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