Saturday, December 29, 2007

Insomnia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Long night holds me wake
As darkness fills a sleep that’s fake
Awake in conciseness, a waking dream
Awaiting only the daylight queen,
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Colm Hayes
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Dr Antony Theodore 05 December 2015

My mind never free till sins repent. very nice poem. sleep, conscience, peace, inner joy. all these are powerfully expressed in little verses. thank you. tony

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 05 October 2008

PAIN EXPRESSED, , , BUT A LOTTA POSITIVITY IN WORDS COZ U WANA RETIRE TO THE DREAM... SOME DREAM MAKE US LIVE :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 October 2008

Very nicely presented insomnia.

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Aryn James 30 December 2007

you have amazing flow to your works. i adore it. -Aryn

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