Monday, October 22, 2018

Insomnia. Comments

Rating: 5.0

These dark shadows are my companion
throughout the night they remain
they keep soothing me like my thoughts
when sleep has gone to fairyland
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Rajan T Renganathan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

.A touching expression has been made on insomnia with its causes. I cite......Body demands, REST Mind is always unrest Sleep - I don't Trust Another night - another distress. Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 October 2018

That is a very nice poem on insomnia. You toss and turn but sleep won't come to your eyes. 'Stars, talk to me tonight we'll play hide and seek let me hide under the bed sheet and you keep searching me as I do whole night to find SLEEP...' is a very nice stanza. Enjoyed.10++++++

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2018

Age is the cause of insomnia, condition your mind and start believing you are just 30 years old.,

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2018

Age is the cause of insomnia, condition your mind and start believing you are just 30 years old.

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