Friday, September 11, 2015
Insomnia Comments
Rating: ★4.3
The night ends with swirling emotions.
Thoughts sharp as a blade,
cutting through sleep.
Flashing lights in darkness,
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7/21/2025 11:56:58 PM # 1.0.0
Very good imagery, one thing maybe to improve, your sentences are incomplete at times and words that should be plural aren't. (The night end(s)) (Thoughts sharp as (a) blade cutting through rest. - rest of what? incomplete thought) (light(s)) Other than that your work is excellent, I love it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Thank you for the feedback, I'll edit it^^ I'm glad that you like it :)