Thursday, June 2, 2016

Insomnia Comments

Rating: 4.8

insomnia steals sheep

capturing them for ransom
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Sonia Walker
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Unnikrishnan E S 14 June 2016

Hi That is an exquisite expression- All banks closed for the night. As a banker and an insomniac, I could relate to your poem easily. Thank you Sonia.

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Sonia Walker 14 June 2016

It is fun to write about things which are the least inspirational. Thank you for adding additional color to my wordsmith canvas. Have a great day, Sonia.

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Sonia Walker 11 June 2016

Insomnia affects many people. It is at its worse when our sheep are kidnapped in the middle of the night and we do not have anything to count to help us sleep.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 02 June 2016

If i had read this writing lightly or casually, i would smile and ask myself what is it all about. But there is insomnia, then sheep instead of sleep, and closed bank. They make a fablous combination, very creative Mohabeer Beeharry

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Sonia Walker 02 June 2016

Thank you for your kind review. Insomnia seems to bother more people than we know. Our brains are like computers sometimes it is difficult to shut them off. All the best, Sonia.

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