Friday, March 23, 2012

Insomnia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Longing for rest,
closing his eyes,
but now comes the test,
the retched lies,
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Atticus Mortimer
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Brian Jani 22 May 2014

Atticus mortimer Im beginning to like your poems

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 April 2012

Poetic Twist at the end as '...But just as He thinks of Her, /He succumbs to sleep. ' wow fantastic...tenner Regards ~ niv PS Please comment on my poem 'I Want To Be Raped' [14 words poetry]..PH banned it ultimately gave in. n

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