Monday, July 29, 2013

Insight Comments

Rating: 4.3

They say there is pain when your heart breaks,
Shattering over remnants of your soul,
Burning withering in confines of your ribs,
Engulfed by the grief
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Lucifera Santez
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Khairul Ahsan 05 August 2013

Don’t wish to hear the shouts, Of lost souls from the shadows………. Well expressed, liked it.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 August 2013

The last two lines... I love. I've written a piece called Insight.

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But do they know how sharp it hurts... nice poem 10 hurts and hurts more....10

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