Sunday, February 19, 2012

Insight Comments

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I love light.
Waves of sight, particles unite.
When out of sight, some feel fright,
I feel delight.
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Jason Pacheco
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Sally Plumb Plumb 20 March 2014

Hi! Nice write. I've written a piece titled Insight. Different from yours. By the way, i enjoyed Seven Four Five.

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Jason Pacheco 18 March 2012

Thanks Rekha for the kind words!

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Rekha Mandagere 17 March 2012

I have often seen people leading one towards light by discarding darkness but here is a lovely poem showing us that darkness is the path through which one can see his vision clearly. Wonderful reasoning!

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Jason Pacheco

Jason Pacheco

Fall River, Massachusetts
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