Saturday, November 14, 2009

Insight Comments

Rating: 5.0

In sight
your eyes say
I have to leave you
because I need to stay.
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Lucifera Santez 04 August 2013

an enlightening write. :)

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Sally P. P. 25 August 2019

Thankyou for your lnterest. Sally.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 September 2010

‘Self Contradiction’ ‘Self Dilemma’ 'Self Dichotomy’ 'Self Indecession' ~ type poetry … Finally gave in, ‘saying go away, /insoluble.’…accepted jolt of jilt from a ‘no’ person…enjoyed tragedy …thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Sally Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Sally P. P. 06 May 2020

I don’t understand some of your remarks, Niv. Shall have to refer to the dictionary. Thanks.

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The eyes are the window of the soul! Short but powerful. Well done!

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Sally P. P. 06 May 2020

Thanks for your interest, Denise.

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Patti Masterman 16 November 2009

Glad I can finally leave my comment on this one. You have really exceeded all quotas, real and imagined, with this. It's a deep, memorable piece of writing, and timeless.

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nomad omnia 16 November 2009

This is a powerful, if quiet poem. First time I read it, I couldn't comment on it, it mixed my emotions so much. It's one I will come back to. N

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Joseph Poewhit 14 November 2009

Eye's can say so much

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