Saturday, June 23, 2012

Inside Us! ! Comments

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Inside us we carry that parallel self

A burial vault without any delf
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Samima ShahFaheem
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Chinedu Dike 22 March 2018

Nice thought provoking poem, well conceived and elegantly penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. thanks for sharing Samima.

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Samima Shah 23 June 2012

Thanks Indira and Hans. @Indira its good to hear that u can relate, I think things very personal to us are the ones very universal :) . @Hans I beleieve pains/regrets one carries are his best teachers along with time. Thanks for the kind words :)

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Hans Vr 23 June 2012

True enough, Samima, each of us carry with us a darker side. But inside each of us is also that wondeful beautiful soul, that allows us to lead a spiritual life. I hope and pray, Samima that you may find your soul, which can truly help us master our darker side. Good poem, nice rhymes..

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Indira Babbellapati 23 June 2012

read like words from my mind... thnq!

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