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yer lol great editing my behalf: p i will check out your poem. Thanx for the feedback

wow, nice poem. i know that feeling and you describe it really well and poetically (it IS a poem after all) I really like that you repeat that verse every other stanza, it makes it really striking, i also like the rhyming (since i myself am not very good with rhyming i really respect the ability to do that) ~Katie ^^