I look at this girl before me
She's familiar, yet unknown
She's reaching out to touch me
She's abandoned and alone
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Great poem...remember that we are in charge of our destinies and our feelings. If you want to be happy you must find it. If it is hard to find all that means is that it is going to take a while for you to find it, but never lose the search. It will take you far off course and it will be harder to get back on. Great imagery you get better and better with expression with every line that you throw out.
wow....this is an awesome poem, and i can relate to it so much...thanks
This is such a great poem. I like it a lot. I can totally relate to it. Keep up the great work.