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thats a really good poem, you see yourself how you used to be, i do to, but we all move on right? because time tolls on the best of us
Very beautiful poem with deep insight... it is very good. Don't stop, you hear?
Now, we know where you've been hiding.....inside writing wonderful poems..welcome to P.H...kellykell....keep writing these lushes writes..10/10 best wishes to you jon
I like this poem I thought it was going to be a story from the way it was written but the rhymes were absoulutly beautiful keep writting and never stop