Sunday, June 27, 2021

Inside The Heart Of Housman Comments

Rating: 4.5

Beyond the moor and mountain crest
In valleys green and still
Ten thousand times I've done my best
And all about the idle hill.
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Alan S Jeeves
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Luis A. Estable 27 June 2021

I like what you have done here. The rhyme is perfect except for one pair. The meter and the feet are carried out well, and the theme of the poem is interesting. This is a well-written poem

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