Sunday, April 11, 2010

***inside The Aquarium*** Comments

Rating: 2.9

Dreams are under colored Water
Beautiful stone
Artificial wave creates the orchestra of schematic life
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Raju Baruah
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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 April 2010

Crystal eyes of yellow night Making a shadow over the moon light breeze ...... Mysterious too. If got the opportunity to experience it...... Yes, you are in poetry. Run long, feel much, write less........... Apoet

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Indira Babbellapati 12 April 2010

a wonderful microcosm of life, this aqarium!

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Rinki Nandy 12 April 2010

Running like a clock Can’t go beyond limitation Can't reach the hip. are you describing the human race in those lines? they are mostly within limitations which makes them normal, clever, smart and ignorant. nice write.

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