Monday, March 26, 2012

Inside Outside Comments

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She sat on the bed quietly reading a letter
Inside the room was sweaty and dark. Outside
it was bright and hot. Hoping it would get better
she read on. The birds sang a negligible reel
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Morgan Michaels
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Jan Freundschuh 27 March 2012

This is so powerful....psychologically astute. The last two lines took me by surprise.....I felt like you were writing about my most hysterical thoughts and reactions. No work at all to see, feel and hear this poem. Really great! ! ! Thank you for your comments on my work. i don't quite know how one is supposed to thank the commenter. I am a little lost on this site.

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