Ocean looks still outside
But its tale differs inside
Swan looks clam outside
But under water its not so
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Many tell many things outside Tell me are the same inside too? wonderful meditative poem 10+++++++++
this is very well put, and the question/answer game compliments it. a ten
A fantastic poem bringing the variance between inside and outside.
The adage of conflict between ‘Inside’- ‘Outside’ well poemed! Ms. Nivedita UK
Last stanza made the poem inside outside too. Interesting read. Best Wishes. Naseer
very interesting way of writing this poem, I like it a lot(10)
Yes, the truth is always inside, isn't it? Well expressed the eternal conflict of outside appearances and inside realities.Keep writing.