Friday, December 11, 2009

Inside Outside Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ocean looks still outside
But its tale differs inside
Swan looks clam outside
But under water its not so
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Padmapriya Boddapati 16 December 2009

Yes, the truth is always inside, isn't it? Well expressed the eternal conflict of outside appearances and inside realities.Keep writing.

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Marieta Maglas 14 December 2009

Many tell many things outside Tell me are the same inside too? wonderful meditative poem 10+++++++++

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Eyan Desir 14 December 2009

Well written Well expressed keep writing

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Anju Addanki 13 December 2009

a very good one.written very nicely.

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Louis Rams 12 December 2009

this is very well put, and the question/answer game compliments it. a ten

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Rajaram Ramachandran 12 December 2009

A fantastic poem bringing the variance between inside and outside.

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Joseph Poewhit 11 December 2009

Only we really know ourselves - sometimes

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 December 2009

The adage of conflict between ‘Inside’- ‘Outside’ well poemed! Ms. Nivedita UK

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 December 2009

Last stanza made the poem inside outside too. Interesting read. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Janell Cressman 11 December 2009

very interesting way of writing this poem, I like it a lot(10)

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Walterrean Salley 11 December 2009

Keen life observations. Interesting.

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