Tuesday, October 24, 2006

Inside-Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart poring onto the page
I’m turning inside-out
On the outsides all people see
That’s what they think of me
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Wandering Scarlet 26 April 2008

wow lot of feelings going on here, a great blend, but a bit long for my taste, lol otherwise i liked it

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 April 2008

I agree with Denise about your talent to write. I just hope you keep giving yourself this outlet. GW62

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Denise F. 29 July 2007

i have to say after reading some of your other poems that you are a very talented writer..this is a very powerful poem..i love the last few lines...keep on writing you have a wonderful gift

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Brian Hobin 29 March 2007

this one really hit me. awesome job, powerful ending!

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Lylyanna Pilewski 24 October 2006

wow that is the most intense ending ever awesome emotion great job on this one. Lylyanna

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