My heart poring onto the page
I’m turning inside-out
On the outsides all people see
That’s what they think of me
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I agree with Denise about your talent to write. I just hope you keep giving yourself this outlet. GW62
i have to say after reading some of your other poems that you are a very talented writer..this is a very powerful poem..i love the last few lines...keep on writing you have a wonderful gift
wow that is the most intense ending ever awesome emotion great job on this one. Lylyanna
wow lot of feelings going on here, a great blend, but a bit long for my taste, lol otherwise i liked it