Thursday, April 23, 2009

Inside Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

People look on the outside
and see what they want to see
but by looking at just the outside
you'll never know the real me.
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Abbie Gorsuch
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Adi Cox 07 July 2009

This poem makes a good point and I like the way it does that. These phrases are expressed with style. The second verse is my favorite verse and I take the point that someones looks and the gossip of those around them takes presidence to what someone is really like. excellent poem.10/10.

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