Sunday, July 27, 2014

Inside Of You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me dwell inside of you
For just a little while
Feel your heartbeat softly pulse
and linger in your smile
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Valerie Dohren
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Ramesh Rai 24 September 2014

Taking every step with you whispering through your voice So together bound in love O how we would rejoice Lovely write. Each stanza is reflection of soul.

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Howard Mcdougal 24 September 2014

Very emotional and vivid thanks for sharing.

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Eugene Levich 21 August 2014

Gentleness, underlying passion, and love. How happy the recipient of this poem must be!

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Amitava Sur 17 August 2014

Wonderful Valerie you just fill my eyes. Cherish them as sweet memories and dream them ever so nice.

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Sandra Feldman 16 August 2014

And they say the British are cold? This poem cloud burn up a storm, so romantically intense and beautiful it is.

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Dee Corpolongo 10 August 2014

Val, you write such amazing poems that leave me in awe. Beautiful! Another one that is a keeper.

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Lyn Paul 09 August 2014

So, So beautifully written with such a suited title. THank you Valerie x

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Dave Walker 29 July 2014

A wonderful wonderful flowing poem, all our souls will one day become one with our loved ones.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 July 2014

The poem is inspiring, filling one with renewed energy to move on with fresh energy. Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 27 July 2014

An inspired write with so much raw emotions bursting with longing for your beloved, as together you could move the world with so much love and strength woven into your souls! I love this moving write full of the beauty of your love!

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