Inside My Soul Comments

Wow, splendid performance from my u Vicky, i love, i have enjoyed it, i have learned from it.Nice, well organised, well phrased, well said and magnificent expression. GREAT WRITE FROM U, KEEP IT UP. I SALUTE U.

It is nice, needs some work but its getting there... e.i. There is an error in line 19, it should be Evil lurking around me or Evil lurking around my shoulder :) Good write...

Nicely expressed. :)

I'm loving it so far, this is going to be a masterpiece I can feel by this fantastic opener, that it's going to dazzle...........keep bouncing those lines out Tori....your work is a force on its own...good luck with the rest...I'm looking forward to reading this poem through to it's end... Best of Health & Happiness Jon

I love the way you express yourself... your not like everyone else...you do something different...i love it so far..keep up the good work