Inside My Secret Chamber Comments

In order to get wisdom and peace soul searches in the secret chamber of the body. Keeping this theme you have startlingly inscribed this poem which touches the hearts of the readers. I love the following lines...... Oh my dear LORD, lead me to guide in your way, I am on my way waiting, to meet You soon someday. A great write.

Locked within the secret chamber of the body, the soul seeks to fulfill its mission here and prepares to fly to a domain of limitless bliss and boundless freedom! A great write, Soul!

Really good write. kudos

There are times in our lives when we just sit around wondering, Am i doing the right thing? Am i taking the right decisions? .......... Time when we just revive our memories our mistakes, trying to discover what went wrong, trying to correct the mistakes, trying to be better......... And these thoughts take place in our privacy.............. I liked your poem especially: Mistakes I have done, written as scars Reveal me things untold by smiles Time will keep flying, no waiting But the child in me still learning Beautiful expression here........ Good work soul keep the smile .... GuessWho

Totally awesome! (((hug)))

A sincere prayer to God to lead you from inside your Secret Chamber is a lovely poem to enjoy.Thanks.

We are here on this earth to learn something and only God knows what and why. We should enjoy life every second, be grateful for another and another day and never spend the time in sadness. As I see, our life is like a software in God's computer and we each put our life experiences into it, and only He knows what happens with that data. Wishing you the best and the happiest time until you are here.

The inside of my secret chamber is a beautiful poem on your credit soul esp. the last lines: I will take, with no surrender Learning more as who i am here Completing mystery of my unwritten soul To be answered...................

Fantastic Soul this is very nice. I loved the idea in your poem really. A fantastic message. The struggle to find yourself within yourself. You really are a mystery, not only for me but also for your own self. The really speaks for you. I liked the waves like style of your poem. Marvelous_Soul

Good written piece. good expressions.

Deep thoughts and well expressed. I commend you.

Yes all questions lead in answer to God! He ends all mysteries but deserves endless pondering. A wondrous personal musing poem we all can take advantage of.

Oh! Please Poet not too soon! ! ! Wait a bit more in your moonlight secret room.

Not yet though Soul, not yet........

all are waiting for the final doom whilst a few are only prepared....................good

i can relate to this poem you made. i remember those times that i had my down moments and remembered all mistakes i had in the past and also a time where i get afraid to commit the same mistake but at the end of the day, i realized that we always will have mistakes...the thing is how we can go through with it...i gave this 10!

But the child in me still learning For who i am, and what i living for You are something Soul really a deep not unwritten but unreadable. I loved the thought in this piece.

This is beautiful writing! So creative and moving.....thank you for sharing your art: -)

it sounds very stong and powerful coming from the withn of yours, Soul! I really think about something like this almost every day by doing my mission to complete in this world..

this is a work of art