Inside My Madness Comments

smooth style indeed keep it up

the smooth flow of words is very pleasing.the poem brings out the hopelessness, helplessness, frustation and disappointment very effectively.nice poem

Beautifule imagery in a simple clear cut fashion, I relate well, and it alway feels somewhat better to wite these things done and look to tomorrow, remember, , , life us just a ride abd feekings cone and feeling come and go, may your future be filled with joy abd rewarding contentment, best of luck. Overall I give it a 10, I totally relate.