Sunday, August 11, 2013

Inside My Heart Comments

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I’m here for you, not truly gone
Inside my heart you carry on
I hold you close in all we knew
The times we held, the breaths we drew
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Holly Jamestone
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Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2013

An excellent piece! Every stanza is captivating, and repetitive last one is simply amazing!

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Denver, CO U.S.A.
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