Wednesday, September 13, 2006

Inside Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

You look my way and I smile
You turn away and I cry
You see me looking as if I live
When all I do is die
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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow
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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 13 September 2006

This is a good piece that gives perfect insight to all the others, the understanding readers, on how the ones described in your poem do feel. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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