Thursday, January 17, 2008

Inside Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inside me its dark come take a look
you will see there is nothing there
even the walls are all bare and blank
the room is completely empty
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Augustus Carter
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Rhiannon Scase 23 January 2008

Truly amazing! I felt the pain as I diverted my eyes from one line to the next, You reached a part in me with your words that I thought could never be reached! You need not to be 'furnished' as you should be made whole by your talent! Loved it! Rhiannon*

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So many ways to hollow out your soul, to depress the spirit and leave an aching emptiness, you really captured the pain with your words.

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