Wednesday, July 4, 2012

Inside It's Not All Smiles! Comments

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I try so hard to be perfect
but perfect isn't good enough
I've tried to hard, and I've given
up hope. I will leave this world,
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Rosey Scouthethern
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Abdallah Gamal 23 August 2012

Yoy better finish it, , it'll look amazing, and choose the right end for your poem, cuz give up and suicide are not good, , I'm sorry if my comment was so harsh :) Glad to read your poems :)

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