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I gave this a 10 out of 10. Great Job! ! !

Hello Sweetheart, I really cherish these lines of Urs.. they are salient and quite expository.. Cheers Love. The Sage.. Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

Alice, I like this poem very much, and you know actually I see you quite clearly Sincerely Egal..

Wonderful piece of poetry Alice. 'Within me is a deep deep ocean'. What a terrific line and I can relate to this poem also. Someone who is so adept at examining their inner self is way ahead in the game of life. Some of us never get there. Cheers....Dan

I relate to this.....sometime we hide ourselves for fear of whatever....and we just want to be loved for everything that we are...yet we still hold back...maybe one could see us better if we opened up our inside and learned not to hide...nice write Alice...you have a great start....Write on!