Friday, December 5, 2008

Inside Domes Comments

Rating: 4.9

Desires are happy lyrics
Written on walls of sorrowful crying.
Paths are dreams
Of good days to come
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
COMMENTS

This is great. I specifically like the last verse: Live if you must. Inside domes but keep a door open.

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Ken E Hall 15 December 2009

Each line in this poem is a meaningful quote which makes the reader ponder and realise it is a very original piece and will cerainly keep my door open in my dome, great work Naseer regards

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Tailor Bell 18 February 2009

it is only those who have experienced the breadth of life...that can convey these meaningful phrases and visions. I enjoyed this very much, Naseer, and will read more of your works. A subtle and masterful work. -Tailor

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

lovely poetic thoughts..great one..10 Ency Bearis

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Tom Golding 16 December 2008

Well said, The final line makes the poem for me also.

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 16 December 2008

wonderful piece of poetry. Nicely penned,10 for you

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Sallie Howson 16 December 2008

lovely...the last line makes it

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Kassem Oude 15 December 2008

What a princess are you looking at/for! She is fantastic. Amasing piece.

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Sandra Fowler 05 December 2008

Beautifully positive in spite of the inner tears. I like your resounding last line. The poet who connects with his readers is a poet who is worthy of the name. Kind regards, Sandra

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