Saturday, May 2, 2020

Inside A World Lives Comments

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inside a world lives

he stretches arms and feels the vast space
a coolness greets as arms turn aside restrictions,
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2020

A magnificent free verse! Beautifully penned.....10

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pckprem 07 May 2020

Thank you all for good words...

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 May 2020

The theme appears to be connected with present lockdown situation prevailing in most parts of the world. It's artistic presentation is superb. Congrats on poem of the day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 May 2020

'it is a ploy to get noticed even in cries, he smiles and he is told it is wisdom a child spreads and contains the cosmos one knows not.'..is such wonderful write. Congrats.

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Life's varied aspect! " it is a fight to get livelihood it is a ploy to get noticed'.Congratulations being POD

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Ramesh T A 06 May 2020

Limitation of each one's world never allows one to stretch much to go up! Yet, one has to bear all the brunt and go ahead with a smile on the face! Indeed a positive expression to rely on! Congratulations to the Poet for the selection of his poem as Memeber Poe of the Day here by PH!

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2020

Strange feelings! ! Noted; Livelihood! ! ! ! ! Like the wisdom of a child. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Harley White 06 May 2020

This poem has some unusual, evocative images... Congratulations for having poem of the day...

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 May 2020

inside a world lives but yes I am sorry to get this poem inside by understanding power; inside of hear a feeling there lives created by brain cells but here weaving words are out of my comprehensive cells... world is weird in the maze of wisdom... congrats

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