Inside Comments

you are a very talented writer. You keep your reader focus from start to finish. Great emotions shown in this write.You made this reader feel what you are saying in this piece.

' inside ' given to the ' outside' world by you.........is great; God Bless You;

your choice of words makes your poem stand out. each line expresses what you felt so clearly. i can feel each word as if it where written on me.

Anjali, I can hear your sensitive heart heave! Well written! Through our poems we can give vent to our thoughts and feelings, and also express the different facets of our personality! Keep writing. - RAJ