Friday, May 9, 2014

Inside Comments

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If I could write a poem
Of how I felt inside,
It would not go like this
I've too much and too little pride,
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Bill Cantrell 09 May 2014

A great poem, I love that you change the stride in your rhyme and your questioning yourself is what makes this poems subject matter flow so nice.

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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