Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Inseparable Love In The Wild Comments

Rating: 4.5

A she wolf is waiting for the return of her dearest
who has gone for food with his pack.
But detached somehow in the very deep forest
and the friends also lost his track.
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Anish Debnath
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Loke Kok Yee 28 September 2015

Your last line stayed in my mind long after I had read this poem, this write up will be even better with a polishing; nevertheless it is still a beautiful poem. thanks

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Anish Debnath 29 September 2015

thank you so much.

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Chinedu Dike 23 September 2015

A well articulated story nicely penned with conviction. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem. Thanks for sharing Debnath.

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Anish Debnath 24 September 2015

Thank you very much Mr.dike

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Kelly Kurt 16 September 2015

It is a lovely poem, Anish. My only criticism is that the English is a little rough in spots. I know how hard it is to translate, so keep polishing your English and keep writing.

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Anish Debnath 16 September 2015

thank you for your kind words sir.please tell me the faults.

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Anish Debnath

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